Thursday 31 January 2013

Chapter I - The City of Castelmaine

In this installment, I show you the layout of the city of Castelmaine. I hope I got it across well enough. It's essentially a pizza that has been cut into quarters, with a tower at the middle. This whole arrangement is in the middle of a flooded crater. It's a bustling city, something I've never been too great at describing with my usual style of writing. I'm not a great descriptive writer. I usually prefer to just lay out the basics and let the reader fill in the gaps, but with this I'm trying to be a bit more descriptive than perhaps I normally would. I hope it's not too weirdly written.

For a long time I pondered on how to introduce a minotaur as a main character. I needed to make sure the readers understood that I meant '
minotaur' literally, not as some kind of term, but at the same time, I didn't want to give a huge description of exactly what I meant. For me, it's important that the reader understands what is 'natural' (insofar as the word can be applied) in a fantasy world. I felt that a large and detailed description would bog down the prose and detract from that feeling of 'norm'. Again, I hope I managed to get it across okay. 

I will sit down and write a decent chunk at some point - since getting back to Epsom I've not had much time to kick back and get on with it. As always, feedback and comments are greatly appreciated. I hope you enjoy it!

Thursday 24 January 2013

Chapter I - In The Beginning

What follows is the first draft of the opening paragraphs of a story set in the world of Evalaria. In these paragraphs is detailed the creation mythos of the world, and the events that would bring about the two Cataclysms that the peoples of the world would come to call the "First and Second Coming of Blackfire". From this, we then enter Evalaria through the city of Castelmaine, a metropolis of magic, academia and commerce, and are introduced to a couple of the main characters, Gideon and Folk.

I hope you enjoy what you read here - comments are greatly received. I will continue writing and post anything as and when I deem it complete enough for viewing. Please note that all posts are subject to change, and though I deem them viewable, may not be entirely complete.